That was my favourite bat! "Good riddance." Rita got up from her seat and said, "Kids, let me explain" "Explain what?!" Even Ronnie Anne was there too. Lincoln: If they're so nuts, I can't be near my family. You're all delusional and irresponsible all the time and I HATE that! (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. Rita pondered for a moment and then said, "Hey I know, why don't we make a quick stop to Aunt Ruth's and" Her idea was interrupted by Lori slamming on the brakes hard, jerking the van to stop. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. I am bad luck! Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." The way she said 'Don't Move,' made Lynn Sr. and Rita flinch in fright, they knew from Lori's tone that she dead serious so they knew better than to disobey, it worked all the time they did so it should work when she did it. Post an update . Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. YOU HATE US!!! This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. Slow down Lynn! "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. I need to get out of here! And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. YOU'RE BANNED! My coffin. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. And after that, the whole room was silent. Luna spots Lincoln). (cries). I'm the Duke! You are about as braindead as you're heartless! "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! We don't know what we were thinking! ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. So they, begrudgingly, got in the back seats. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. "Aren't you guys going to help us?" Did anything life threatening happen? *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. How convenient for me. Also yes, this story takes place in season 5. Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. Leni was working, even though she wasn't even hired and what she was doing is illegal (author interruption: ok I know, to be fair, this is Leni we're dealing with and she means no trouble, but still, what she's doing is unreported employment, which is against the law, look it up if you don't believe me). (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. Rita: Sweetie, please! Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. And can you please unlock my room for me? (continues to cry. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. White hair extended ending9. I certainly am not! You never let me have a say in the matter! ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. Except for Lynn). Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. No pun intended. WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" She smiled as Lincoln took it. (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. "Not cool, guys." You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! At least this thick skin won't let me down! Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. "you bad luck, Lincoln!" Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! And with that, they headed towards the lobby. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! How can I help you?" Lincoln: You can't do anything right! Theres nothing lucky about it! ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! You can never come back. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. Lisa: Easy, easy! Ruth shouted back, insulted. Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! I feel like a fool! Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. The siblings and parents saw Leni standing there, mom and dad were curious why Leni wasn't with them in the room but before they could say anything, Lisa answered her, "Yes my second oldest sibling. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? Lola yelled. Lisa: (sighs) Obviously one that needs our cerebrums and mental spirits adjusted. Theres no need to shout. Just because of superstitions?! ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. "Huh. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. Note: The reason why I am doing this is because I hate No Such Luck, however I hate most of The No Such Luck fanfictions as well. This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. Dont threaten your little sister! You can't ground us, we're the parents!" Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! All of a sudden another 6-year old wearing a princess gown snatched the walkie talkie out of Felix's hand and said, "All right lady. In this Loud House Alternate universe a man made virus force's mankind to abandon earth.all except one 11 year old Lincoln Loud was accidentally abandoned by his parents and five sisters as an infant and was forced to fend for himself 11 years later Lincoln has adapted to his new hunting and gathering lifestyle and. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! I heard you scream! I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. I'm not bad luck. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Lucy: Lincoln, stop! I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. Rita Her Rights alt ending11. I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! We are no longer grounded to the room. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. I thought you were my family! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! (Cries) All my precious tiaras. As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. Luan added. "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. I loved it. Im sick of everything thats happened to me! They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! Lincoln: Alright then, call them. Why are you being arrested?! But in hindsight, I guess I should've thought about it more before lying to you guys. Here's another Alternate Ending. NOTHING!! There's no need to shout. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Was the thought on her mind. *, Lincoln: It's not fair. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. You overreact to everything! This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? I wonder if the windows are locked?" Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. I hate that you don't love me anymore! The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. Status Update. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. I hate that you never listen to reason! Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Any bad luck? ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. DeviantArt Protect. And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! I hate softball! We get it. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. Do I mean nothing to you? Journal. Trivia. Leni: Linky, dont shout. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! ESPECIALLY THE EXTRA TOE! Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Sweaty Pants here! But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! Lisa: (beat) Okay, i admit, maybe there were many explanations to resolve such crazy, inane hooey. Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Lana said, glaring at her parents. Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. Rita: Lincoln?! Understood?!" They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). She opens it, revealing all of the siblings' love interests.] "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? He managed to, but with a twist. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. It's no fun without Lincoln! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). The fact that you locked me out of my own home all because of superstitions ithurt, it really hurt it felt like a jab inmy heart." We're already hanging on a thread as it is! Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! Nobody ruins my life, casts me out and then uses me, understand!? Lincoln: Okay. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! They all shouted. I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. Rita: Sweetie, calm down. (Raises his fist at her). Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." HATE ME FOREVER!!! I would feel awful if you did. Lana: Gee. All rights belong to Nickelodeon. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Why? The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. I MESSED UP!!! Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. Everyone finally realized that what they've done. We wont! I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! Just so you know, in case you ask about that). I hate clowning! Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. She playfully rolled her eyes. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! I was being selfish!. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. What kind of parents would do that? Lincoln: "Did anything bad happen, something life threatening that I would be deemed 'bad luck'? Lincoln: "Coming!" I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. lincoln. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Dont rage out at us. Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. Rita: Okay Lincoln! "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. Lynn: HUH!?!?! My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I cant take a moment more of this! WE'RE BRUTES!!! "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." I hate boring science lectures! But right now, ive had it! "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Completed We didn't just barge into the room.